新东方六级——写作、作文笔记
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写在前面

要点

1.不写题目,除非“write an essay entitled/titled xx”
2.写作格式:三段式,每段开头空两个字符,段与段之间不需要隔行,第一行不写东西
3.字数:170-180
4.题型:论述文,包含传统、名言、画图、图表
5.保证卷面,字迹清晰,不要划黑坨坨
6.写作翻译及格分:128分;卷面分写作翻译各15分
7.

审题

一般论说文讲解

at a rapid rate = rapidly

I go to the gym regulary.
regulary = on a regular basis

live in a green way 环保地/绿色地

creative mind/thinking/mindest 创造性思维

attach great importance to 高度重视

the reason are as follows 原因如下

develpoing/fostering/cultivating a creative mindset

is beneficial to 好处
匹配审题抓到的方向

creativity
creativity ability
creative thinking

a requirement of …的必备条件
ensure more desirable results 确保更理性的结果

stress 压力
mutual respect 相互尊重
mutual understanding 相互理解

emtrepreneurs=businessman
glimpse 一瞥,一窥
seek business oppotunities and build a prosperous company
booming

范文一: 鼓励学生培养创造力

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on why students should be encouraged to develop creativity? (2020.12 卷三)

In the contemporary society where technology is developing at a rapid rate, creative thinking has been brought into focus. At the same time, many experts suggest that both teachers and schools should attach great importance to encouraging students to develop creativity. A number of reasons can be collected to explain the suggestion.

The reasons why the development of students’ creativity is of considerable importance are as follows. Perhaps the primary reason is that developing a creative mindset is beneficial to academic success. In addition, no one could deny the fact that creative ability can exert a positive influence on future career. The stories of most successful entrepreneurs in the world, such as Steve Jobs, provide a glimpse into how creative mind can help them find business opportunities and build a prosperous company. Lastly, with competition growing fiercely, thinking outside the box is increasingly a requirement of ensuring more desirable results. Then how to develop creativity? Perhaps the first step is that students need to read extensively to enrich mind. Another crucial step is to put novel ideas into practice.

In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of being creative and I highly suggest that everyone, especially university students invest effort to cultivate creativity.

contemporary adj.当代的,现代的;同时期的,同时代的 n.同时代的人;同龄人,同辈
rapid adj.快的,迅速的;n.急流,湍滩;
expert n.专家;人才
deny v.否认;拒绝承认;拒绝给予
exert v.运用,施加(影响);努力,尽力(exert oneself)
entrepreneurs n.企业家,创业者;
glimpse n.一瞥,一看;短暂的感受,短暂的体验; v.瞥见;
opportunity n.因素;机会;机遇
prosperous adj.繁荣的,富足的
competition n.竞争;比赛,竞赛;竞争者,对手
fiercely adv.凶猛地,猛烈地;极其,非常
increasingly adv.越来越多地,不断增加地
requirement n.要求,必要条件;需要
desirable adj.令人向往的,值得拥有的;可取的;性感的; n.称心合意的人(或物),好的品质
result v.发生,产生;终归,导致; n.结果,后果;
extensively adv.广阔地;广泛地;巨大地
crucial adj.至关重要的,决定性的;
dowument n.文件,公文,; v.记录,记载
invest v.投资;投入;赋予
effort n.努力,艰难的尝试;力气
cultivate v.开垦,耕作;栽培,培育;陶冶,培养;建立(友谊)

译文:
在科技快速发展的当代社会,创造性思维成为人们关注的焦点。与此同时,许多专家建议老师和学校都应该重视鼓励学生发展创造力。许多原因可以来解释这一建议。
学生创造力的发展很重要的原因如下。也许最主要的原因是, 发展一种创造性的思维方式有利学术成功。此外,没有人能否认这一事实,创造力可以对未来的职业产生积极的 影响。世界上最成功的企业家的故事,如史蒂夫·乔布斯,可以让我们一窥创造性思维如何帮助他们找到商业机会并建立一个繁荣的公司。最后,随着竞争的日益激烈, 打破常规思维越来越是确保获得更理想结果的必要条件。 那么如何培养创造力呢? 也许第一步是学生需要广泛阅读来丰富思想。另一个关键步骤是将新想法付诸实践。
总之,有创造力有许多有据可查的好处,我强烈建议每个人, 尤其是大学生,努力培养创造力

一般论说文2——平衡工作和休闲

相较于上一节课的模板,调整中间段

对症下药

fail to do sth
be unable to do sth
have trouble doing sth

Recent years have witnessed the increase in the number of students who fail to balance academic study and extracurricular activities
近年来无法平衡学习和课外活动的学生越来越多

不要用太多那些:there is no doubt that 之类的模板套路句子

主题词多样化:词性变化带来短语结构的变化
achieve the balance between work and leisure
achieve work-leisure balance
atrike a balance between A and B

医患关系:doctor-patient relationship
师生关系:teacher-student relationship

人们做不到,专家说重要

great importance should be attached to 大量的重要性应当被加在…
所以 to 是介词

strike a balance between A and B。实现平衡 A 和 B

increased workload 工作量增加
modern technology 现代科技
the advances at remote working technology 远程办公技术的进步
the advances at medical technology 医疗技术的进步

CP原因法:
couple

off-hours 非工作时间

connection with sth/sb 有特殊的联系,如血缘关系等

connection with sth/sb 一般的联系

The coupling of 原因1 and 原因2 has made it diffcult for sb to do sth

The coupling of the lack of discipline with cold weather has made it increasingly diffcult for me to lose weight
自律的缺乏和寒冷的天气的结合使得我越来越难减肥

establish boundaries between friendship and romantic relationship
设立友情和爱情的边界

范文 2:平衡工作和休闲

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance work and leisure. (2018.12.卷二)

With society developing at a rapid rate and pressure increasing steadily, recent years have witnessed the increase in the number of people who fail to balance work and leisure. In light of this situation, many experts suggest that great importance should be attached to achieving work-leisure balance, as it plays an essential role in living a happy and successful life.

One main reason why many people are unable to keep a balance between work and leisure nowadays is that the coupling of increased workloads with modern technologies has made it increasingly difficult for people to cut the connection to jobs in off-hours. Then how to reverse this situation? Perhaps the first step is that people need to improve working efficiency and time management ability. Specifically speaking, it is necessary to prioritize tasks and focus on the most important things either in the workplace or at home. Another crucial step is to establish boundaries between work and leisure time. Lastly, it is imperative for the media coverage to draw public attention to the balance between work and leisure.

In conclusion, we should not ignore the problem mentioned above and I highly suggest that everyone, especially young people invest effort to strike a balance between work and leisure.

steadily adv.逐渐地,稳步地;不变地,稳定地;
witness; n.目击者;证人;见证;证据,证言;证明标志; v.目击,目睹;见证,经历
leisure n.闲暇,业余时间;休闲活动; adj.空闲的,有闲的;业余的
essential adj.必不可少的,非常重要的;基本的,精髓的;n.必不可少的东西
workload n.工作量,工作负荷
reverse v.逆转,彻底改变;撤销;颠倒,反转;交换,互换; n.相对,相反(the reverse); adj.相反的,反向的;
specifically adv.特意,专门地;明确地,具体地
prioritize v.按优先顺序列出;优先考虑
establish v.建立,设立
boundary n.分界线,边界
imperative adj.极重要的,必要的;命令的,强制的;祈使的; n.重要紧急的事
coverage n.覆盖范围;新闻报道;
strike v.打,撞;打击; n.罢工,罢市

译文:
随着社会的快速发展和压力的不断增加,近年来无法平衡工作和休闲的人越来越多。鉴于这种情况, 许多专家建议应该高度重视工作与休闲的平衡, 因为它对幸福成功的生活起着至关重要的作用。
现在许多人不能平衡工作与休闲的一个主要原因是工作量的增加与现代技术的结合使得人们越来越难以在非工作时间切断与工作的联系。那么如何扭转这种局面?也许第一步是人们需要提高工作效率和时间管理能力。具体来说, 确定任务的优先级并且集中注意力在最重要的事情上, 无论在工作中还是家里都是很必须的。 另一个关键步骤是设立工作和休闲时间的边界。最后, 媒体报道有必要使公众注意到工作和休闲之间的平衡。
总之, 我们不应该忽视上面提到的问题,我强烈建议每个人, 特别是年轻人努力在工作和休闲之间取得平衡。

一般论说文讲解3

critical thinking 批判性思维
credit card 信用卡
credible 可信的,可靠的

be supposed to = should ,前者语气更弱

现在分词作伴随的结果状语

find=discover=spot
misleading adj. 误导的
leading adj. 指引的
inform v. 告知
information n. 消息
disinformation 虚假消息 = false information
in the use of 在使用…的时候

范文 3:网上虚假信息

Directions: ….. to write an essay related to the short passage given below. In your essay, you are to comment on the phenomenon described in the passage and suggest measures to address the issue. (2021.12.18 卷一)
Young people spend a lot of time on the Internet. However, they are sometimes unable to recognize false information on the Internet, judge the reliability of online information sources,or tell real news stories from fake ones.

With technology developing at a rapid rate, recent years have witnessed the increase in the number of young people who fail to recognize false information on the internet. From my point of view, reasons behind this phenomenon are various and we need take effective methods to address the issue.

One main reason for this issue could be that the coupling of information explosion with the lack of media literacy has made it increasingly difficult for people to judge the reliability of online information sources. Then how to reverse this situation? Perhaps the first step is that young people need to improve their critical thinking ability and cultivate a habit of gathering credible resources via multiple channels. Another crucial step is that educators are supposed to teach students information literacy, helping them learn to spot misinformation in the use of the Internet and social media. Lastly, it is imperative for the government to implement a package of policies to supervise and regulate network environment.

In conclusion, information technology is a double-edged sword and I highly suggest that people, especially our younger generation acquire necessary skills to evaluate online information to become informed and rational citizens.

various adj.各种各样的;迥异的,千差万别的; det.pron.不止一个的
explosion n.爆破,爆炸
literacy n.识字,读写能力;专业知识;精通文学
reliablitity n.可靠性;可信度
critical adj.批判的,爱挑剔的;极其重要的,关键的
gather v.聚集,召集;收集
credible adj.可信的,可靠的;足够好的,有明显效果的;
multiple adj.多个的,多种的;多人共有的;影响身体许多部位的; n.倍数
implement v.执行,贯彻;为……提供工具; n.工具,器具;
supervise v.指导(某人)的工作;监督
regulate v.控制,管理;调节,调整;
sword n.剑,刀;
acquire v.获得,得到;学到,习得;患上
evaluate v.评价,评估,估值
rational adj.合理的,基于理性的;理性的,理智的;富有理性的;有理的,有理数的; n.有理数

译文:
随着科技的飞速发展,近年来无法识别互联网上虚假信息的年轻人越来越多。在我看来,这一现象背后的原因是多方面的,我们需要采取有效的方法来解决这个问题
造成这一问题的一个主要原因可能是,信息爆炸与媒体素养的缺乏相结合,使得人们越来越难以判断网络信息源的可靠性。 也许第一步是年轻人需要提高他们的批判性思维能力,培养通过多种渠道收集可信资源的习惯。 另一个关键的步骤是教育工作者应该教学生信息素养,帮助他们学会在使用互联网和社交媒体时发现错误信息。最后,政府必须实施一揽子政策来监督和规范网络环境。
总之,信息技术是一把双刃剑,我强烈建议人们,特别是我们的年轻一代掌握必要技能来评判网络信息,以成为有见地的和理性的公民

写作4 画图作文

六级画图作文:先看题干后看图,图会反映主题
图画作文的本质是论述文

背景句由大到小

fake infromation
and 前后时态一样可以保持对成型,而且 and 表并列
work 有名词词性和动词词性

crisis n.危机,紧要关头;决定性时刻,关键时刻;(病情的)转折点,危象; adj.用于处理危机的

I highly suggest that sb (should) do sth 虚拟语气

危害主体段模板

范文 4. 图画作文(误导信息带来的危害)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the harm caused by misleading information in spite of advanced information technology. (2015.12.卷三)

In the contemporary society where people enjoy the convenience of technology, the problems caused by technological inventions have also been gradually brought into focus. As is vividly depicted in the picture, a man is complaining “I just feel unfortunate to live in a world with so much misleading information!” The man’s words reveal that nowadays false information online can influence people’s daily life in harmful ways.

The negative consequences of online misleading information can be illustrated from two aspects. For one thing, it would be universally acknowledged that false information on the internet is detrimental to learning and working efficiency. For another, many psychological researchers found that online spread of misleading information can have an adverse effect on individuals’ mental well-being. For example, during Covid-19 crisis, many people felt depressed and anxious when they saw some misleading advice or statistics in social media, such as Weibo and Twitter. Then how to counteract the negative effects mentioned above? Perhaps the first step is that the government need to implement relevant policies to supervise and regulate network environment.

In conclusion, information technology is a double-edged sword and I highly suggest that people, especially students improve their ability of judgment.

contemporary adj.当代的,现代的;同时期的,同时代的; n.同时代的人;同龄人,同辈
convenience n.方便,便利;便利的事物
gradually adv.逐渐地,逐步地
vividly adv.生动地;强烈地
depict v.描述,描绘
mislead v.误导,将……引入歧途
influence n.v.影响,作用;势力,影响力;有影响的人
negative adj.否定的,拒绝的;有害的; n.底片,负片;否定词; v.否绝,拒绝;
consequences n.后果,结果;影响
illustrated v.加插图于……;为……例证; adj.有插图的
aspects n.方面;方位;面貌
univerasl adj.普遍的,全体的; n.普遍原则,通用原理;普遍看法
universally adv.普遍地,人人;随时随地,在各种情况下
detriment n.损害,伤害;造成损害
spread v.adj.展开,打开;张开,伸开; n.扩散,蔓延;范围
adverse adj.不利的,有害的;相反的;敌对的
individual n.个人;个体
depress v.使抑郁,使沮丧;降低
depressed v.adj.抑郁的,沮丧的;萧条的
anxious adj.焦虑的,担心的;渴望的
statistics n.统计学;统计数字
counteract v.抵制,抵消,中和
implement v.执行,贯彻;为……提供工具; n.工具,器具;手段
relevant adj.有关的,切题的;正确的
supervise v.指导(某人)的工作;监督
regulate v.(用规则条例)控制,管理;调节
judgement n.判断,看法;判断力,识别力

译文:
在人们享受技术便利的当代社会,技术发明带来的问题也逐渐被人们所关注。如图所示,一个男人抱怨说:“生活在一个有这么多误导性信息的世界里,我感到很不幸!” 这名男子的话揭示了如今网络上的虚假信息会有害地影响人们的日常生活。
网络误导信息的负面后果可以从两个方面来说明。一方面,得到普遍认同的是网络上的虚假信息不利于学习和工作效率。其次, 许多心理学研究人员发现, 误导信息的网上传播可能对个人的心理健康产生不利影响。例如,在 Covid-19 危机期间,许多人在微博和推特等社交媒体上看到一些误导性的建议或数据时, 感到抑郁和焦虑。 那么如何抵消上述负面影响? 也许第一步是政府需要实施相关政策来监督和规范网络环境。
总之,信息技术是一把双刃剑,我强烈建议人们,特别是学生提高他们的判断能力

写作5 图表作文

雅思作文就是图表作文

标准:描述反映主题的数据

动态图:柱状图、线图
要看起点和终点
ratio n. 比率,比例
percentage n.百分比,百分率

动态图怎么看:
1.横坐标+纵坐标
2.明确坐标对应的数据指什么
3.找到直接反应主题的数据变化

未来的描述方法:

上面的成就是错的,因该是achievement

be bound up with 与…息息相关

make sth more accessilbe to sb 让某事对于某人来说更容易获得
access n.通道 v.访问

benefit n.好处 v.让…获益
benefit sb 对某人有好处
beneficial adj.对…有利的
beneficiary n.受益人

Both A and B are the beneficiaries of C

范文五: 图表作文(高等教育的成就)

Directions: ….. to write an essay an essay based on the chart below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the chart and comment on China’s achievements in higher education. (2021.6.卷二)

As is clearly demonstrated in the bar chart, the gross enrollment ratio in higher education in China increased dramatically from 3.4% in 1990 to 51.6% in 2019. Apparently, the figures reveal that China has made remarkable achievements in higher education. From my perspective, the reasons behind accomplishments are various.

I can think of no better reasons than the following ones to explain this social phenomenon. In the first place, this success is bound up with technological advancement and economic growth. Besides, Chinese government has implemented a package of polices and raised plenty of funds to make higher education more accessible to students including those from families in poverty. At the same time, both citizens and the whole society are the beneficiaries of the accomplishments in higher education. To be specific, receiving higher education can improve individuals’ competitive edge and contribute to the sustainable development of the whole society.

In conclusion, this chart is a perfect index of the remarkable achievements made in China’s higher education. Meanwhile, it is reasonable for us to believe that such a tendency will continue in the forthcoming years and definitely contribute to our country’s prosperity in the long run.

demonstrate v.证明;示范,演示;表露;游行
gross adj.总的,毛的;严重的,极端的;粗鲁的;肥胖难看的,臃肿的;adv.总共,全部; v.总共赚得; n.一罗(144个);毛收入,总收入
enrollment n.登记;入伍
ratio n.比率,比例
dramatically adv.剧烈地,明显地;戏剧性地,夸张地
apparently adv.据说,显然;似乎,好像
reveal v.揭示,透露;表明,证明;展示; n.揭示;门侧,窗侧
remarkable adj.引人注目的,非凡的
perspective n.透视关系,投影比例;洞察力,判断力;adj.透视的
accomplishment n.成就,成绩;技能,才艺;完成,实现
various adj.各种各样的;迥异的,千差万别的; det.pron.不止一个的,各别的
accessible adj.可到达的,可进入的;易得到的,
poverty n.贫穷,贫困;
beneficiary n.受益者,受惠人;遗嘱受益人;封臣; adj.拥有封地的,受圣俸的
individual adj.单独的,个别的;个人的;独特的,与众不同的; n.个人,个体;与众不同的人
contribute v.捐赠,捐助;
sustainable adj.可持续的,持续性的;
tendency n.经常性行为,偏好;趋势,趋向;
fourthcoming adj.即将发生的;乐于提供信息的,愿意提供帮助的;现成的,可得到的; n.来临
definiteil adv.肯定地,当然;明确地,确定地
prosperity n.繁荣,成功

译文:
如图所示,中国高等教育毛入学率从 1990 年的 3.4%大幅上升到 2019 年的 51.6%。显然,这些数字表明中国在高等教育方面取得了显著的成就。在我看来,成就背后的原因是多方面的。
我想不出比下面的更好的理由来解释这个社会现象。首先,这种成功与技术进步和经济增长密切相关。此外,中国政府已经实施了一揽子政策并筹集了大量资金,让更多的学生,包括那些来自贫困家庭的学生接受高等教育。同时,公民和整个社会都是高等教育成就的受益者。具体来说,接受高等教育可以提高个人的竞争优势,有助于整个社会的可持续发展。
总之,这张图表完美地反映了中国高等教育取得的显著成就。同时, 我们有理由相信, 这种趋势将在未来几年继续下去, 并肯定有助于我国的长期繁荣.

写作6 名言作文

attach great importance to 高度重视

to + 对象 介词
to + 表目的 to do 不定式

come up with 提出

鼓励他人、传递正能量、团队合作、团队精神、团队意识、团队管理能力、帮助别人也能用

范文六: 名言作文(尊重他人的重要性)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark: “Respect others, and you will be respected.” You may cite examples to support your view. (2013.6 卷一)

A famous and enlightening saying goes that “Respect others, and you will be respected.” This remark conveys a thought-provoking notion that people should attach great importance to showing respect for others, as this behavior is the key to gaining respect from people around us. In my opinion, examples from history, science and everyday experience can attest the notion mentioned above.

The reasons why respecting other people matters are as follows. In the first place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and enjoyable working atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success. The stories of famous teams in the field of competitive sports, such as Chinese Women Volleyball Team, provide a glimpse into how mutual respect among team members can contribute to a harmonious and successful team. In addition, some sociologists believe that treating friends, acquaintances, and strangers with respect in daily communication can exert a positive influence on interpersonal relationships.

In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of respecting other people and I highly suggest that everyone, especially young people behave in the way the proverb suggests.

enlightening adj.启迪的,使人获得启发的; v.阐明,指导;教导,启迪;
convey v.传送,运输;表达,传递;
provoke v.激起,引起;激励,刺激;挑衅,激怒
notion n.概念,想法;缝纫用品
solid adj.坚硬的;固体的,固态的;结实的; n.立体图形,立方体;固体;固体食物;
foundation n.地基,基础;基本原理,根据;
competitive adj.竞争的;好竞争的,好胜的;
mutual adj.相互的,彼此的;共同的,共有的;
harmonious adj.和睦的,融洽的;悦耳的;和谐的,协调的
treat v.对待,看待;治疗,医治;
acquaintance n.相识的人,泛泛之交;认识,相识;
strangers n.陌生人,陌生事物;门外汉
exert v.运用,施加
interpersonal adj.人际关系的,人际的
proverb n.谚语,格言;典型,模范

译文:
一句有名且启迪人的话语说道: “尊重别人,别人也会尊重你。” 这句话语揭示了一个发人深省的道理: 人们应该重视尊重他人, 因为这一行为是获得周围人尊重的关键。在我看来,历史、科学和日常经验的例子可以证明上述观点。
尊重他人很重要的原因如下。首先, 在工作场所尊重同事有利于创造一个积极愉快的工作氛围, 这可以为团队成功奠定坚实的基础。竞技体育领域的著名队伍的故事,如中国女排, 可以让我们一窥球队成员间的相互尊重如何促进一个谐和成功的团队。此外,一些社会学家认为,在日常交往中尊重朋友、熟人和陌生人对人际关系有积极的影响。
总的来说, 尊重他人有很多有据可查的好处, 并且我强烈建议每个人, 特别是年轻人按照名言建议的那样去做

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    Windows Chrome 107.0.0.0
    2 年前
    2022-12-02 10:52:52

    好家伙 就准备6级了 祝你顺利😝

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      bobi83
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      Windows Edge 107.0.1418.62
      2 年前
      2022-12-05 0:36:11

      好家伙,我都快要毕业了,再不过6级就要寄了

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